Bullying
can happen anywhere and to anyone. This is the use of threat or force to abuse,
intimidate, or aggressively to impose domination over others, and is more
common in the schools because the kids or the teenagers are unaware about the
causing damage and the bullies don't have empathy. Can be physical or verbal,
both kind of bullying are very bad for the health of the victim, and also
affect the lives of the family. The verbal bullying will be a hard trauma in
the future because could be causes a low self-esteem, depression and suicides
in more drastic instances. The insults or joking more common are of sexism,
homophobia, racism, intelligence and socioeconomic status.
I will tell
you about a school classmate's story, Diego. He was a special person, because
used to play with his drumsticks in the table (like a battery). Never bothered
anyone, but didn’t get along with the guys in my school. A muscle head of my
class, was bully, and made his life a hell. He persecuted to Diego in all high
school indicating his face saying "look at him" for that everyone
laugh at him. He made bullying him because his brother was "ñato",
used to use verbal bullying every day for fun. When Diego finished the school,
don't saw more their former classmates (the guys), but the stupid bully went to
the same university and studied the same career. This seemed like a second part
of this story, and this time was different. Muscle head, failed in almost all
his subjects and was delayed a lot in the university, while on the other hand,
Diego already is graduated to physical education teacher and is happy doing
classes in their old school.
The bully is the loser now.

Maribel,
ResponderEliminarWC: 321. A little bit too many.
Interesting description of your experience, you didn't go into hard details, but the reader can still feel the sensation the writer is describing. Very good. Yous should try to write more.
please, pay attention to the following obs.;
Bullying (it's) IS kind of a new subject …
…What I remember (lived and saw) LIVING AND SEEING in my female primary school made me change my opinion.
…especially lucky for (been) BEING there just for 3 years between 5th grade and 7th grade.
Cheers,
JC
Maribel,
EliminarThese are the real comments about your entry. Please excuse me. Your story is interesting, I am sure these things happen all the time. Please, pey attention to the following obs.;
Maribel,
WC: 295
… or aggressively (to) impose domination over others,
…about the (causing damage) and the bullies don't have empathy.
…IT Can be physical or verbal, both kindS of bullying are
…also affectS the lives of the family. (The) verbal bullying will be a hard trauma in the future because IT could be cause(s) a
…The <2 insults or joking <1 (more) MOST common are …
…because HE used to play with his drumsticks ON (in) the table (like a (battery) THE DRUMS). HE Never bothered anyone,
… was A bully, and made his life (a) hell.
…When Diego finished the school, HE DIDN’T SEE (don't saw more) their former classmates (the guys) ANYMORE, but the stupid bully went to the same university and studied the same (career) MAJOR.
Diego already (is) graduated (to) AS A physical education teacher ...
Cheers,
JC
Teacher, are 295 words.
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